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I write letters to you in these poems,
in thin strips of rolling ink,
this line-breaked code, a darkroom pool
of encrypted ripples. When your descendants—
attic passersby—your wife—see this picture
(thick white border and stark script—
Thursday, 6:30 a.m. At school early
),
they will wonder who stole your spirit
into this photo album's clear slips:
who knew you in your early days.

Convex glass distorts your body.
In late night, I wash the chemicals out of my hair,
go to bed, see negatives behind my eyes,
remember the flash and lens flare
when you shifted to the right
and your hair flamed shafted sunlight.
Then the slow Polaroid click of your eyelids.

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--and then my roommate realized I write a lot of romantic poems.

critique welcomed.

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*toxic-nebulae Dec 26, 2012  Student Writer
a darkroom pool
of encrypted ripples

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I'm feel like I'm spamming you. Whateva. Whateva. I do what I want.

I like this one better than the one before it. Kristen just realized you write a lot of romantic poetry? She cray cray.
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~soporous Jun 26, 2011   Writer
[link] what I thought about when I read "cray cray."
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Lulz for days. Yup. That's Kristen.
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